Wednesday, July 15, 2020

Unmasking Draft

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NtGGOATF9bkrRtvrG9GOinlj3LkKkldD/view?usp=sharing

This is a revision of a script I made for Screenwriting class last semester. The class was really fun, and I really enjoyed being able to share something I created and that people liked it. I haven't posted this script before now because I thought I was going to get around to rewriting it. The asterisks mark the revisions I was asked to make.

There are a few problems with the script that I want to eventually address. The ending is not what I intended. I put too much into one episode that should have been two episodes. Separating it would also improve the pacing. And so on. I also suspect there are still a few typos, and that I'll probably want to slightly change the themes of the story overall.

But I realized I might as well put this version of the script on here now. I like it as it is. I just want to make it better sometime.

And this is the original version of the script, if you're interested.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rfp5gk-QMfVOjh0gEse_v2Fnulm7hYYW/view?usp=sharing

God, I love you. I trust you. Please make happen what you want to happen.